on Oct 31, 2016
Hey man nice job! I thought the production quality of this was really good, and the idea of a sitcom about brooms was funny too. Where I think this could have improved was actually exploring that premise, as right now the only way in which their world is affected by being brooms is in the names they have (this could have been a sitcom about apples and you can just ctrl+f and replace broom with apple and use the same script). I'd check out stuff like Dinosaurs, Drawn Together, etc. to see the lengths they go to to explore the idea that they're these non-human things living human-like lives. Otherwise good job and keep submitting!
Mar 01, 2017 at 2:15am
Hoping to get some feedback on my rejected pilot, "Broommates"
Thanks for any critiques/suggestions!
Oct 31, 2016 at 8:39pm
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