Rejectee Therapy for Looking for feedback: https://youtu.be/kENRwy1o_hQ, thanks in advance!
Started by Kaylan Aksel on Jul 26, 2017
  • I thought this was a creative show, and it definitely stood out to me at the panel. But Matt's right, a lot of pilots end where they should start, and I think that's the case for this.
    Jul 31, 2017 at 8:36pm
  • Hi! Watched your entry. I'm the guy who made the failed pilot 'Double' so I particularly love science fiction and this had a lot of dope elements of that.

    Overall, I think that this doesn't really fit the channel101 format. In general the episodes for CH101 need to be COMPLETE episodes with an arc for beginning-middle-end. And I think yours (whose opening credits don't even appear in till 4 minutes in 4/5 of your entire time) wasn't built for this format.

    I love Andy and her work. And I think that all the underwater shots were dope as fuck, but if this were me, I'd have cut down that opening scene from 3 minutes to 20 seconds, hit that underwater shit, and then put in the "Open the door" problem moment. That's your FIRST ACT for this episode. And shouldn't have taken more than... 1.5 minutes. That would have given you the rest of the time to RESOLVE that shit.

    Anyways. Submit again! The colorization here and the interesting choice of no sound was pretty damn bold. Rock on.
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    Jul 26, 2017 at 6:21pm
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