Rejectee Therapy for Coming to Dinner
Started by Mike Dennehy on Aug 24, 2017
  • I just watched it. Feel free to resubmit this but, to me, it doesn't feel like a strong 101 pilot contender. This is a kinda confusing sketch that's seems to be about racism but then it's about a cheese girl wanting to kill a salami or something. There's not really any stakes or story. They kinda talk about it for a while and there aren't really any laughs.

    For your next pilot, I would recommend trying to tell a full story. Start with a main character and a goal and put obstacles in front of that character. And while sometimes it works well to confide your story to one location or one scene, it might help you to open up your world a little more.
    Aug 25, 2017 at 1:55am
  • It got 500 views on the one day I tried it on reddit. I still honestly don't know how good or bad it is...
    Aug 24, 2017 at 9:04pm
  • Got it. I only did a quick test on real life doodles (on reddit) to see if it was terrible or not. I'll take it down if that will get it considered. Thanks for letting me know, I really just assumed it must be terrible
    Aug 24, 2017 at 9:03pm
  • We didn't watch this at the panel. I think because it was already online and had several hundred views.
    Aug 24, 2017 at 7:29pm
  • https://vimeo.com/227570679/4cbb8f99c0
    Aug 24, 2017 at 7:18pm
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