Rejectee Therapy for The Picture Show
Started by Shawn McDaniel on Aug 25, 2017
  • Hey,

    Glad you submitted another show. This pilot sets up a world where instead of people, there's pictures of people, and then you spend all your five minutes kind of explaining that. The world building is not particularly interesting or funny. For your next pilot, I think it would work better to step the world and protagonist and get running with a story.
    Aug 25, 2017 at 2:02am
  • https://vimeo.com/230633930?ref=em-share

    Feedback would be nice.
    Aug 25, 2017 at 1:01am
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