on Sep 27, 2017
Good thoughts thank you.
Sep 29, 2017 at 3:58am
Yeah I think you hit the nail on the head. Lotta character intro, no real story or problems. I love making stuff longer than five minutes but it never works to do that and cut it down for 101.
I'm not a huge fan of the tone of this. I tend to rarely dig jokey joke tone acting. Actors taking their silly situations for real is always much much more pleasant to watch. The jokes themselves also felt like not very inspired vague superhero references.
I hope you keep submitting to 101. Write something for five minutes and kick the story into gear right away.
Sep 28, 2017 at 7:11pm
Full name My life on the super villain d-list. I submitted this and would love some feedback. Youtu.be/bl7-sBhlfDQ. I originally saw this as a ten minute pilot but tried to cut it to eight when I discovered this contest. I feel like I lost too much story and too many jokes. I also felt like I spent too much time on characters and needs but not enough throwing a problem at them. Thoughts?
Sep 27, 2017 at 9:51pm
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