Rejectee Therapy for A Cynical Dog (Rejected Pilot)
Started by Rodrigo Méndez on Mar 30, 2018
  • Thank you very much! I will definately keep working on Rupert. Next month I wont be in LA but I am still submiting a new pilot!

    thank you for the good criticism and encouragement. I loved being able to attend and will definately travel to LA again to attend
    Apr 04, 2018 at 2:28am
  • KP Parker says:
    Hi Rodrigo! I was on the panel last month. This pilot was a lot of fun. We LOVED how the main person said Rupert. So funny. I wanted to see the pair go do something, like go on an adventure earlier. It seemed like a lot of talking. Please keep making this, it has a lot of potential!!
    Apr 03, 2018 at 9:32pm
  • Thank You very much for the feedback Timm, I find it very refreshing to hear this kind of feedback, I will definately keep submitting!
    Mar 31, 2018 at 4:34am
  • The logo is great. I like the concept. I was totally in. Once the dog started to go down the existential dilemma wormhole I started to check out. I think you might have better luck with keeping the idea more grounded. Stick with the concept of the dog being cynical with day to day stuff. Maybe he has to get a job and the job sucks. Maybe he decides that the boy is too needy inverse of mans best friend scenario. Maybe the boy trys to do dog and boy stuff and the dog has a cynical albeit funny comment. You know day to day stuff. Don't race right to existentialism within 10 seconds of being conscious.
    The butt licking joke was funny it got a solid laugh but got old after 3 uses. Try to punch up the jokes the dog tells. The boy should be the question the pitch if you will. The dog should be delivering the punchlines.
    All in all you have a good premise here just need to write the dialog a little different and I think this would kill. Good luck buddy! Keep submitting :)
    Mar 30, 2018 at 6:11pm
  • So, I git really bummed out when I got my rejection e-mail. But this is an opportunity to keep getting better. So hit me hard with your constructive criticism.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dza7NhKK2YY&feature=youtu.be
    Mar 30, 2018 at 5:38pm
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