Beam Me Up - Pilot
on May 24, 2018
Animation is hard work, and I think you accomplish a lot for this pilot (as well as your last entry- Robo Goes to College).
Story-wise, Chutt's just an absurd character- so his journey here feels arbitrary. It's a little hard for me to rally behind him as the protagonist- and that made me check out early.
Technically, I think a little more polish would help. I think a quicker pace would help sell the comedy a bit better- plus maybe some light music could help bridge it all together.
Great job 5 minutes isn't easy to animate- can't wait for the next one.
May 25, 2018 at 9:11am
I think one thing that would help is try to make the dialogue flow a bit better. It really kills the momentum when there is a large pause between characters talking.
Try to make them go back and forth and feel snappy, keep our attention the whole time. I think you had our attention up until the 1:00 mark, and it slowly drags.
Just needs some tightening, and funnier lines is all.
May 24, 2018 at 4:55pm
Just wanted some feedback for my pilot here to improve for next time!
May 24, 2018 at 3:37pm
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