Rejectee Therapy for Feedback on my rejected pilot West Coast Curl
Started by Scott Anderson on Jul 26, 2018
  • Hey Alex! Thanks for you feedback, really appreciate it.
    Jul 28, 2018 at 3:52pm
  • Hey Scott,

    I think you critiqued yourself just fine. We all dug the style but it played like a commercial and we couldn't follow the story.

    Make something else with this fun style but with a clear story!
    Jul 27, 2018 at 7:40am
  • YouTube link to Restored version as well.

    https://youtu.be/OMAuWCzLhpI
    Jul 26, 2018 at 3:44pm
  • This makes things easier, hereís a YouTube link to it as well.

    https://youtu.be/YiYIWmR5oqU
    Jul 26, 2018 at 3:32pm
  • Sorry Password is WCC Ad 6
    Jul 26, 2018 at 1:15pm
  • I knew I was going to have a tough time with this one because it doesnít play like a pilot, it plays like a commercial. My idea was to create a bunch of banned never before seen Jheri Curl commercials in the vein on Soul Glo that had an interconnected storyline but I should have made a story more clear with this one. Itís cool though, I still would love feedback to see what anyone thinks.

    https://vimeo.com/278589591

    Password: WCC84
    Jul 26, 2018 at 12:10pm
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