Rejectee Therapy for Feedback on lets plant a tree
Started by Micah Stahl on Jul 26, 2018
  • Gotcha Alex. Yeah, I see what you mean. I'll try something that moves more next time.

    Thanks for your response!
    Jul 27, 2018 at 6:50pm
  • Hey Micah,

    Thanks for submitting. Not speaking for the rest of the panel, but for me, this is just one long scene of characters bantering and I wasn't particularly amused by any of the banter. I say try a story that moves. Pick a main character, give him/her/it a goal immediately and take off running.

    Also, this didn't affect anything, but by total coincidence there were three talking three pilots in submission this month.
    Jul 27, 2018 at 7:52am
  • I'm trying to figure out also if it makes sense to make a new episode of the same show or move on to a new concept? Thanks.
    Jul 26, 2018 at 3:19pm
  • Just looking for feedback on my pilot, thanks!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=52T57ZL3yaU&feature=youtu.be
    Jul 26, 2018 at 3:18pm
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