Rejectee Therapy for Doctor Whomst - feedback please!
Started by Oliver Harrop on Sep 27, 2018
  • This was a cute show (please substitute a less patronizing word for "cute" on my behalf), but the production quality and pacing wasn't quite there.

    The costumes were good, and the gags with the box were fun. You can lean into that aesthetic, but, even without fancy gear, you can make a decent-quality show.

    But you two seem to have a decent sense of story. Keep making videos with your friends. Move to California. Drop out of school.

    Also, watch this series of videos from 11 years ago:
    https://archive.org/details/acceptable.tv-tutorial-story-structure
    Sep 29, 2018 at 10:38am
  • https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GeMWoVV7EWQ

    Thanks!
    Sep 27, 2018 at 6:19pm
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