Feedback/Therapy for pilot “Boggled”
on Jan 24, 2019
I thought the first minute of this was really solid and it had me expecting to like this show a lot more than I ultimately did. That first minute established a fun premise quickly and had good momentum but the show really grinds to a halt once George Michael ties the main characters up and just starts monologuing and then the show ends. Keep things moving! Take a trip around the Story Circle if you’re at a loss for where to steer your characters.
Also, minor note, I don’t know if you need two title sequences. That second one helped kill the momentum. You could probably replace that first production title card with the second actual title sequence from the middle of the episode.
Anyway, I thought this was promising and hope you submit something new soon!
By the way, where is that archival Boggle footage from? That was interesting.
Jan 25, 2019 at 10:54pm
Hey everyone! New to the community! We were just looking for any feedback or advice on our first attempt at a pilot. Thank you all for taking the time to look it over :)
Jan 24, 2019 at 8:16am
Jan 24, 2019 at 8:15am
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