Rejectee Therapy for Feedback for “Rap Shit: Your Friend Tobias”
Started by Adam Johns on Jul 26, 2019
  • Thank you so much for the feedback. I appreciate it.
    Aug 02, 2019 at 8:24am
  • KP Parker says:
    Hi Adam! I was on the panel this month so I'll try and let you in on what we were thinking! Overall, this is a BEAUTIFULLY shot pilot. So gorgeous and visually appealing. I think we REALLY want to see the human character enter within the first minute of this pilot. It felt like it didn't get started until he showed up but 2 minutes in is too late. Small notes: since the footage is SO pretty, I would recommend choosing a nicer or simpler font for the subtitles. That font isn't great to look at. Also, the goat voice is very grating on the ears. It's funny and I like the idea but it is a little loud and there are like definitely not enough breaks or moments of silence. I think silence can go a long way in this pilot! OR maybe even we hear all his thoughts in human speak and only hear that goat voice when he is physically speaking! Great work, excited to see more!
    Jul 26, 2019 at 7:06pm
  • https://youtu.be/8kC20gNFin0
    Jul 26, 2019 at 6:58am
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